
As I shut my eyes
Your radiant visage is at the corner of my vision
Your presence warms my soul
Your hand guides my journey
Your wisdom allows me to see the truth
Your courage fortifies my own
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I long to shut my eyes again
So I can be in your company once more
Very welcome 🙂
Thank you! 😊
Sleep can be a magical time. This poem captures that well 🙂
Thank you and I love your interpretation of my poem! 😊
How I read this is the memory of the eyes of someone gone. Eyes in your peripheral vision is a nice concept. Eyes of angels watching you. To imagine their thoughts as ‘It’s good to see you living each day fully and it’s going to be interesting to witness where you are going next in life’s adventure’. Then you have your own eyes wide open for witnessing the journey. Your own eyes closed and imagining the comfort of knowing that you have treasured support on your ongoing adventures. Great poem. All the best.